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  1. Starfyre66 on Chapter 4 Tue 02 Sep 2025 09:19PM UTC

    I'm really enjoying the direction the story is heading in, but I think you could use some proof reading. There's a lot of small typos, and the dialogue gets a little clunky, nothing that giving it a read wouldn't fix. If you can't find a beta, maybe use an AI tool to help?

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    1. RedRizzler on Chapter 4 Wed 03 Sep 2025 12:42PM UTC

      Thank you so much for your feedback!
      I'll take it into consideration and honestly, I really do sometimes struggle with good dialogue, so it doesnt surprise me, that it comes of clunky.
      So I will try and improuve it!
      But I still hope you enjoy this ff c:

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