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  1. Lacunan_Trooper_Arkfall on Chapter 7 Sun 13 Sep 2020 03:09AM UTC

    I don’t know, mate. I feel it detracts from the otherwise beautiful story, but to each their own

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    1. AKissAndAGunshot on Chapter 7 Sun 13 Sep 2020 03:33AM UTC

      If you don't like digressions from canon, you probably aren't going to like the sequel

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      1. Lacunan_Trooper_Arkfall on Chapter 7 Sun 13 Sep 2020 03:41AM UTC

        Naw, that ain’t the part I don’t like. The date is very clearly 2551. The “1” in front looks like a damn typo every single damn time, but that’s just me. Just bothers me enough to take away from the story, but isn’t a big problem

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        1. AKissAndAGunshot on Chapter 7 Sun 13 Sep 2020 04:25AM UTC

          Fair enough.

          I'm glad you like the story otherwise. I intend to post the sequel eventually, but work and natural disasters have been causing me a lot of undue stress lately... I doubt it'll be done before the end of 12020.

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          1. Lacunan_Trooper_Arkfall on Chapter 7 Sun 13 Sep 2020 04:39PM UTC

            Grr. 😡
            Good one 😂. Well done👏.
            I’ll look forward to the sequel! I hope your stressors die down for you and I wish you the best of luck

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