Comment on Messiah’s Rebellion: The Beginning

  1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 09:42AM UTC

    Oh yeah it would be very funny to see Futaba having an aneurysm seeing Yukari and all.

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    1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 09:46AM UTC

      I see what you edited lmao

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      1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 09:53AM UTC

        Yeah it's fine, but what are your thoughts about Kotone's awakening?

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        1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:01AM UTC

          It is nicely done and the way eurydice is here is cool. You know always wondering why its called orpheus (f) instead of eurydice in royal... just a bit tmi in the awakening in my opinion
          And just write it at your own pace. Burnout is writer biggest enemy afterall

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          1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:13AM UTC

            Fun fact: I wasted an entire day struggling to get Kotone's awakening to not be half-assed, and ya know what? It's so damn worth it in the end. A climatic finish if you coul say.
            Also what's tmi, I don't use shorthand much.

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            1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:15AM UTC

              Oh sorry. Tmi is too much information.

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              1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:21AM UTC

                Well, sorry. I'm just too excited. Plus when you read it again and again, you'll realise how short it actually is. It just looks like a wall of word.
                And I'm still in awe how I was able to turn some part of Persona 3's message onto its head in this fanfiction.

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                1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:22AM UTC

                  Its no problem at all

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                  1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:26AM UTC

                    Yeah, but did you know the reason why I choose the Fool arcana for Kotone?

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                    1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:30AM UTC

                      Uh no
                      Start of a new journey or something? Even though she's already done with her journey she'll find a new one (panthom thief) something like that?

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                      1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:44AM UTC

                        Oh fuck, that's actually smart. Yeah that is why, did you notice the Roman numeral XXII also? It all lines up, especially the damn silver barrettes on her hair.

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                        1. Magscript on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:48AM UTC

                          Yeah the 22nd confidant its all lined up

                          So jaldy is hunger i presume?

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                          1. florentinomain00f on Chapter 5 Wed 31 Aug 2022 10:54AM UTC

                            Yaldy is Hunger, yes. A deity that is consumed by its lust for power, which ultimate led to its downfall as Ren fire a Deagle to his face in the most flamboyant way possible.

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