Okay SO, I know it's like an unspoken rule to not have full-ass conversations via fic comment but I feel the need to reply to this (I did recently follow you on tumblr, but I don't think you've touched it in eons)!
1. You're so silly, I did love your huddling fic- I'll have to read more of your smut outside of that realm. But I feel you. My very first fic is riddled with all sorts of mistakes I've since learned to stop making, and it's not that I don't love that fic, because I do- it's my baby- but when I get a new reviewer on that one, I always sort of hope they read my more recent stuff, because I think I'm a better writer now. Or at least... I like to delude myself into thinking I am :P
2. The "shitty flats" comment was a bit dramatic of me, I more so meant exactly what you said, 'hardly used hardly loved', etc- just blank and sad and nothingness. Which, like I said, totally makes sense, considering, but I thought it was a nice bit of detail that you gave hers character.
3. As for the fingering thing - I 100% have a lot of clit-loving going on with my fics, but when I say 'fingering', I mean finger-fucking. Fingers go inside of Rose in my fics, but it's usually just exploratory (or very briefly skimmed over, or collecting of moisture, etc), not much just pure, drawn-out finger-fucking, and who doesn't love a bit of that 😂 I'm writing a new OT3 one-shot (TxRxT2) where fingering will be coming way more into play. Regardless... Love love loved it in your fic, haha
4. I know you like a long comment, but a long RESPONSE comment might not be your jam, so... apologies, fam, hahahaa. I hope you're having a wonderful day and that you have a wonderful week! ♥♥♥
Ah who cares - let’s have a chat. And yes… Tumblr is something I rarely visit nowadays 💀 it’s just never really gelled with me and I always stuff up my feed by following all these tags and random accounts. But I have been meaning to revamp the account associated with this one so I can expand the audiences a bit and make myself be a bit more accessible :,)
1. I’ll put it this way - I don’t think the smut I wrote in Close is like horrible levels of writing, it’s was just written in a very rushed way and not the level of detail/pace I try most of the time so I’ve always been a smidge disappointed by it 😂 It’s one of the only, I’m pretty sure *the* only fanfiction of mine that I have reconsidered rewriting.
2. Haha ahhh I get you - shitty flat does make sense. Yes, I felt our girl needed some character 🤌
3. Ah yesss. Yeah I totally see that now - but you always gloss over it very well so it’s never an issue (for me)! Oh my 🫣 I’m excited.
4. Any type of long comment/response is everything 🫶🏻 Give them all to me. You too 🫶🏻
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