In the Dark

by EftoKolasi

Chapter 2: Im So Sorry

At this point in time, I have no motivation to complete this story, so for now I'm going to close it out as a oneshot.
I've taken way too long to update this story, I've even started several others since first posting In the Dark.

I've got other fics I want to write, and many that still need to be finished. Since i currently have another star wars fic started (starfire/DC crossover, also kinda dark, feel free to check it out and tell me if my writing improved any after this one), and I still have motivation to write it, I'm going to limit myself to one chaptered fic at a time, and anything else will be oneshots, or else all chapters will be posted at the same time and will be complete.

To anyone who wanted to see where this story went, I'm so very sorry to end it. The only solace I can offer is that I may roll this story into "Nightstar Wars" as an OC introduction. The jury is still out though.

If I ever do come back to In the Dark, I will delete this message.

Anyone is more than welcome to come and talk to me about anything, my sm accs are in my bio.

I hope everyone is safe and doing well ❤

Notes:

Please judge this. And be honest.
Tell me what you liked, or didn't like, and feel free to make suggestions.
I plan to write more chapters, as well, but I'm flying by the seat of my pants on this one.
I will definitely give physical descriptions in detail in later chapters, I just wanted to focus more on the dark tone of the story in this intro. And get opinions in the process, before I locked in on Hannelore as my main (over Sarai and Casimir, Dathomirian Zabrak hybridS, representatives sent to broker an alliance with the Supreme Leader).
I will later introduce Eira: an Arkanian offshoot, an albino/elfish/female; and Esha: a Firrerreo (all the r's) which is basically a cross between a human and an animal, in this case a tiger (imagine a female somewhere between Tigris from the Hunger Games and Tigris from Kungfu Panda, exotic and curvy and like sex on legs).
Seriously, though, please tell me what you think!