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  1. Public Bookmark 51

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    We all make mistakes. Even the best of us, authors who have been writing for years, slip up. That being said, I’ve noticed a lot of writers, particularly young ones or newbies, taking a shot in the dark with spelling, grammar, and general formatting. While they should be applauded for sticking with their stories, these mistakes can frustrate readers and turn them away from a solid story. How many of us have clicked into a fic, only to leave when we find one big wall of text? How many of us have physically recoiled at an inappropriate synonym or substitution, the phrase snapping us out of the story and haunting us long after we’ve finished reading?

    For those writers who are starting out, inexperienced, or simply unsure, here are a few things I’ve noticed.

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    05 Oct 2025

  2. Public Bookmark 3

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    L Lawliet does not like to lose. He despises being backed into a corner and having no way out. He loathes trying every trick, every scheme, every strategy he has, only to come up short in the end. More than anything, he hates—truly hates to admit when the game is over. There’s nothing else. They won, he lost. Because L Lawliet is childish and petty, and he does not lose.

    Which is why this particular incident is so frustrating to him.

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    05 Oct 2025

  3. Public Bookmark 56

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    Max Caulfield's photography project takes an unexpected turn when she's reunited with Chloe Price, a bold and unpredictable mechanic from her past. What begins as a simple class assignment quickly spirals into a game of teasing glances, stolen kisses, and something far more intense than Max ever expected. As the lines between work and desire blur, Max realizes that there's more to Chloe—and to herself—than she ever imagined.

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    Max Caulfield gay panicking when she unexpectedly reunites with her now ridiculously attractive former high school classmate, Chloe Price.

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    30 Aug 2025

  4. Public Bookmark 33

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    When Kyomoto draws her legs shyly up to her chest, Fujino mirrors the motion of her body. She tilts her head up to look intently at Kyomoto, and the world slows down to a trickle.

    It feels like a scene plucked from a movie.

    Right now… Her eye is the aperture of a camera lens, and Kyomoto is her whole world. It’s the great paradox in motion, between her jackhammering heart, and the moment unfolding before her, innocuous and sublime as the unfurling of a rose in bloom.

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    24 May 2025