astralArchetype



Recent works

Recent bookmarks

  1. Public Bookmark 6

    Tags
    Summary

    “You can’t change the game, McVries. This is what has to happen.”

    “I don’t want to change the game,”

    The time for lofty aspirations was over; it was every man for himself,

    “I just want you to try and help Ray. Take him to a hospital, try and make him better. You can use my winnings for the bill, I don’t need them; I only need him.”

    Or Ray survives The Long Walk, and Pete goes through it as they both recover

    Language:
    English
    Words:
    8,294
    Chapters:
    2/?
    Comments:
    15
    Kudos:
    36
    Bookmarks:
    6
    Hits:
    320

    16 Feb 2026

  2. Public Bookmark 37

    Tags
    Summary

    Pete’s talking pretty now, telling Ray something about dancing and the moon. From the way he’s looking at him, they might as well be the only two people on the road. Forget the other boys, forget the cameras, forget the unblinking soldiers cradling their carbines, Garraty and McVries might as well be the last two slow dancers at the prom.

    Or: Five walkers who think Pete will die for Ray, one who thinks Ray will die for Pete.

    Language:
    English
    Words:
    14,281
    Chapters:
    6/6
    Comments:
    64
    Kudos:
    214
    Bookmarks:
    37
    Hits:
    1,788

    03 Jan 2026

  3. Public Bookmark 6

    Tags
    Summary

    A Stór Mo Chroí,
    when you're far away,
    From the house that you'll soon be leaving

    A 2 winners au, from Ginnie's point of view

    Language:
    English
    Words:
    4,784
    Chapters:
    2/?
    Comments:
    6
    Kudos:
    29
    Bookmarks:
    6
    Hits:
    278

    26 Dec 2025

  4. Public Bookmark 8

    Tags
    Summary

    "What d'you wish for, McVries?" It was said by the boy Arthur Baker, two days before he would buy his ticket hemorrhaging somewhere in the brain. Pete regarded him for a moment.

    "I had a wish for a long time — years, actually, but... I've changed my wish in the last couple days." There'd been that easy, lopsided grin on McVries' face, the confidence of a man who was in on something everybody else was not: "From now on, I'm gunna wish that the Long Walk has two winners."

    He was scoffed at by the boy Hank Olson, one day before he would buy his ticket with his insides spilled across the road. He pressed on.

    "'Cause then, in the years to come, people can have hope that maybe their friends might just make it." Pete's easy, lopsided grin was matched by the boy Raymond Garraty, who had known what it is the boy Peter Mcvries knew that everybody else did not.

    Ray would buy his ticket two nights later, crying: "I love you, Pete."

    The brain, Garraty. Not man or God, it's something in the fuckin' brain. That's what Pete had said. To survive a bullet to the head would be nothing short of a hand-to-God miracle, but stranger things have happened.

    Language:
    English
    Words:
    9,213
    Chapters:
    2/?
    Comments:
    18
    Kudos:
    37
    Bookmarks:
    8
    Hits:
    421

    13 Dec 2025

  5. Public Bookmark 46

    Tags
    Summary

    When Pete McVries gets one cosmic do-over, a choice to redo the Walk and save Ray, he doesn’t hesitate. The muscle pain, torn-up feet, sleep deprivation, hallucinations, nausea, and finally a bullet — he’ll go through it all again to get five more days with Ray, and to make sure it’s Ray who makes it out alive.

    When it turns out that this is not just a one-time do-over but a time loop, he doesn’t quite know what comes next.

    Or: Can a highway in Maine, like Hill House or the Overlook Hotel, be born bad?

    Series
    Language:
    English
    Words:
    26,940
    Chapters:
    1/1
    Comments:
    42
    Kudos:
    156
    Bookmarks:
    46
    Hits:
    1,940

    09 Dec 2025